School athletics... Should It be compulsory?
Do you think school athletics should be compulsory? Well i'l tell you why I think it should not be compulsory.
Paragraph 1: Opinions
Not everyone likes sports. Therefore we should not have to do athletics if we do not want to. Also some Primary kids may get tired from doing athletics after a long period of time.
Paragraph 2: Activities
Most people dislike 1 or 2 of the activities. Eg Some people don't like high jump but they are compulsory to do it. Also some people may get teased if they do not do as well as other people.
Paragraph 3: Overall
Some people just overall don't like running, throwing, jumping, So I think they shouldn’t have to do it and they should pick if they can or can’t.
Conclusion
In conclusion people overall don't enjoy the same things as everyone else. So that's why I think that athletics should not be compulsory.
Hi Hannah my name is Liam Daniel from kaingaroa school,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you organised your writing with headings and paragraphs.
I totally agree with your statement and wish to hear more.And because some are not the athletic type, they still exell at many other things.
Liam Daniel
Hi Liam. Thank you for your comment and your feedback. It's nice to know what you think of my writing. Do you like to do atheltics? Anyway keep up the great work Liam.
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