Wednesday 12 June 2019

Persuasive writing

This week we did some persuasive writing about if we think Greymouth's future is in tourism. We had to do 3 to 5 paragraphs with a introduction and a conclusion.

W.A.L.T  Write a piece of persuasive writing

Is Greymouth’s future in tourism?!

I think Greymouths future is in Greymouth. I wonder what you think?

One thing that brings tourists to Greymouth is the beautiful Transalpine train that brings tourists to Greymouth from Christchurch. You see a lot of tourists walking along the flood wall taking pictures of the beautiful water across the road from the train station.

Greymouth also has Monteiths Brewery which attracts a lot of visitors as it allows tourists on a tour about how certain alcohol is made.

Another thing that attracts tourists is our amazing bush walks! We have a lot of bush walks and they have a lot of native bushes and trees that tourists love to see.

Have you been to Brunner mine? Well if you haven't you definitely should. It includes a lot of history about the explosion including the interesting but sad mass grave down at the Stillwater cemetery. The Brunner mine site is a huge attraction it also includes some old bricks that were also made there

1 comment:

  1. Hey Hannah! Great to see you sharing your writing and your maths work! Your DLO looks great. I think you might have enjoyed doing persuasive writing! Keep up the good work!

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